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AdarinX
10-22-2006, 05:09 PM
Its a little shorter than the first two chapters. Only like 2000 words, but its still nice. I'd like to appologize for the lack of action in the chapter, I'd tried to make it as interesting as possible. Please read and review.

Lodisen
10-28-2006, 09:11 PM
Very well written i must say. Keep up the good work. :)

AdarinX
10-29-2006, 01:09 AM
Theres a couple of typos... but hey... what are you gonna do? When Im done with chapter 5 (which is taking longer than i expected) Im gonna go back and fix all the errors.